Thursday, November 11, 2010

Snowflake


Winter is crawling toward us like a drunk old man. Slowly creeping, with all the signs of annoyance. I'm starting to mentally prepare myself once again for a long winter, although this time last year, we already had some snow on the ground, but you just never know how long it will last. It hasn't snowed here yet, thank goodness! I'm hoping we can make it until December until we see snow, but that is wishful thinking.

It's been pretty lonely and quiet at the Bravo household with my wife being in Detroit and Chicago this week. Next week she'll be in Indianapolis, Kansas City and Phoenix interviewing. Sad!! But I know she'll do well, my lover always does awesome at anything she does!

To keep me occupied these two weeks, I agreed to edit two manuscripts. Both of them are pretty short, less than 100 pages each. I already edited one of them in two days. I wasn't too impressed with the content, but clearly the author is a polished writer, with few if any grammatical errors or typos'. We are asked by the publisher to not only correct the grammar, but also write about a page with further comments. I tend to be a little harsh on my comments and very blunt. Yet I do this not out of arrogance or to be mean, I do it because I would want someone to point what needs to be fixed in my own manuscript. I remember when I received one of my manuscripts edits with hardly any comments. To be frank, I was a little disappointed the editor didn't take the time to comment on how the manuscript could be better. Some months later I received more edits to the same manuscript and this time almost every page had some sort of comment, whether it be positive or negative. This was the kind of feedback I wanted. Something specific, something that stood out and this is what I try to duplicated when I edit someone else's manuscript.

I bought Canto General by Pablo Neruda the other day at a used bookstore. This is the MASTERPIECE of one of my favorites. Just last Monday I started to read it and after the first page I quickly put it down. I realized this is a book cannot I leisurely read. When I read it, I'm know I'm going to have to be completely focus and soak in any inspiration I can from it. Knowing that I usually have about 2-3 books on my night stand, that I switch back in forth, I need to wait and give it the time it deserves. Wow, that first page just blew me away!

I received my copy of PALABRA (actually, I bought my copy, still waiting for my contributors issue). I was really impressed with the quality of the journal. High quality! I'm also really impressed with the other writers in the edition. Some of them write such random and weird things, it makes you like it. Its really weird to explain, maybe a good analogy would be Lady Gaga. Ha! Her weirdness makes her undeniably interesting. Maybe I need to be more Gaga-like...oh crap, does that mean I have to start wearing flesh...anyone have A-1 sauce?

Saturday, November 6, 2010

Music In Poetry


I've added a new addition to my blog, its called Music In Poetry. I am basically reading some of my poems mixed in with some music. It's pretty cheesy, but cool at the same time. I have only put 4 of the 20 songs/poetry I have created.

I got the idea about a year ago. As a way to improve my poems. I decided to record myself reciting them. This gave me a better idea on where I wanted the pauses, how the tone of the poems was progressing and also the rhythms of the poem. After voice recording about 10 poems, I got the idea to put music behind it. I quickly learned how to use Garage Band and began cutting and looping some tracks. It gave a whole new dimension to my poetry. I loved it!

This is also a great way for people to get familiar with my poetry and also to promote it. The master plan will be to keep doing some tracks and putting them on the blog. Check them out!

Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Bikes, Cars, and Poetry


It has been a crazy week and it is only Wednesday! Monday night I did a night bike ride with a bunch of guys who get together every Monday at Tranquility Park. The trail is about 6 miles longs and it is really close to my house which makes it even better. I wouldn't say that I "love" the trail, to tell you the truth, I actually don't really like it, maybe because it is in the city and so I don't feel it is a very natural ride like the other rides outside of town. However, this trail does give you a great workout, so I think of it as a "workout" trail.


The guys on the ride were very nice. Everyone seemed really into biking so it was a relief to see other humans as pumped about biking as I am. I did feel a little inferior though, since everyone had these awesome full-suspension bikes and I have a sucky bike I bought at sporting goods store, oh well, I'm saving up my pennies as we speak for a better one this coming spring.


I hope to ride a little this weekend, at least do Tranquility once, but I'm not sure how this weekend is going to pan out since I don't have a car...which bring me to my next point.


Tuesday morning, I got up to go for an early swim and to my great disappointment, my stupid ignition won't turn! I can stick the key inside but it won't let me turn it. I've tried everything from lubing the key, to stomping on the break, to even cussing and saying words my mother wouldn't want to hear me say. I've tried all night last night and again this morning. No luck. I think I must have triggered a safety device or something. Anyways, I'm getting it towed either today or tomorrow. I just pray it's not going to be expensive!


Poetry, oh yes...Since November is National Write a Novel month, I thought I'd challenge myself to get back in the swing of writing and try to write a rough new poem everyday for the next month. I realize much of it will be rubbish, but at least I can start to get the wheels spinning and begin that ever so daunting second manuscript!

Tuesday, November 2, 2010

Feliz Dia de Los Muertos


Today is Day of the Dead, a special tradition celebrated in Mexico and some parts of Latin America. Unlike Halloween, Day of the Dead is a bit more serious in nature, as people pay respect to those who have passed before us. Typically relatives of the deceased will visit the graveyard and make an altar for their loved one. Placing flowers (marigolds are the symbol of death in Mexico), candles, candy and food. Relatives will also bring items that were loved by those who passed, such as chocolate, or maybe they liked to play chess and therefore a board would be set up. The logic and legend of this is that the spirits will come back to enjoy what they once enjoyed in this life.


It is a very colorful and happy celebration. Honoring those passed, by remembering them, and offering them gifts. This is a tradition that dates back to the era of the Aztecs and has spread not only to all of Mexico but also to the United States. I pray for my loved ones and look forward to one day being with them again.


-Rufino Bravo

-Dora Bravo

-Ramon Quant

-Tio Moncho

-Tio Donaldo

-Laura Cockson

-Margret Bolas


We miss and love you!!